Love is like a lump of gold
hard to get and hard to hold
from all the guys i’ve ever met
you’re the one i can’t forget
I chosed you from all the rest
because I knew you were the best.
By: Esthela Ramirez
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May 9, 2008 by itzuri24
Hello Itzuri,
I thought your page looks very beautiful.The poem was very nice and I thought it would have been even better if you would have included the SOAPSTONE. Good Job
i like the rhyme scheme in your poem. gold is nice too. hold on to that special someone you love o so very much
HELLO ITZURI I LIKE YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT EXPLAIN HOW GIRLS LIKE YOU FEEL ABOUT THE ONE THAT THEY LOVE AND THEY MET!♥♥
In this poem i noticed a rhym scheme of AA,BB,CC… It is short, but it is getting a message out there is most defiantly room for expansion or improvement. Nice choice over all though, of cousre there is ryhme and similie. All in all though good job and you should try writting something of your own sometime it’s fun easy and it all comes from the heart.